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Jon book – part five

Jon book, part five. I’m losing momentum, though I do have more down than just this.

But what wild things can I do? I still want your input.



-Electric Bubbles

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18 thoughts on “Jon book – part five

  1. Wow. REALLY good, though not what I was expecting. What happened to Dystan? In the last bit he was hopless hepless and in the dumps, but now he’s all up and going! What happened to him??!!! Wow suddenly everything is going well! Nice!
    The big guy; I like him already! Now don’t kill this one! haha every character I like you kill off right away it seems! 😉

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